Hmm.

This sounds extremely muddled and what not, =(
The drum samples aren't too great, it doesn't feel like there's any real note structure.

Just a lot of random notes, that're gated, and then the bass doesn't really follow it.

The melody that comes in near the end, obviously comes in way too late. and should probably be faded in much earlier in the song, and in a better way, the bubbly (love philter?) sound doesn't sound too hot.

Could use a lot of work, but keep trying my man ;)

Thanks for the review on my song!

dis is lyk

u mke gud pardise on E musik D:

@Everlasting-Elements

Don't you know what goa is? Lol :P